We have been studying about Germs, Nutrition and Health this past month. One of my students was so inspired about the topic of germs that she went home and wrote up a little essay. I typed it up exactly as it was written.
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Grems Story by AV
1rst Paragragh
Grems are everywhere. Grems are on the world. They can be even on you! Mucus is in youre moth, throt and in youre nose. Mucus caches grems. Mucus is sticky to catch grems.
2nd Paragragh
Befor you eat, wash youre hands. Because you have grems on youre hands. And plus use liquid soap to wash youre hands. The bare soup has a jerms on the bake.
3rd Paragragh
Grems are even in the bathroom. And in youre baby brothers and sisters diper. And in slober. If you wash your hands all the time you are healthy. Are you learning about germs?
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4 comments:
Impressive! Your student writes better essays than some of my kiddies!
I was quite impressed with this. Yay!
that's brilliant!
I am justr happy that she learned something...
:-)
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